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-# Cleaning day
+# Cleaning day may mean more than cleaning up the house
 
-Saturday is cleaning day. Day for tying loose ends. Sort, toss, tidy.
+Saturday is my cleaning day. I've recently started expanding the cleaning
+concept to my digital and management clutter. So it's a day for tying loose
+ends. Sort, toss, tidy. Finish and archive.
 
-The week has been about dealing with an intern as well as a pile of
-due print jobs, a few still pending, needing to get done before monday morning.
+This week has been about initiating the setup for our intern as well as developing
+and finishing a handfull of print jobs, a few still pending, needing to get
+done before monday morning. Work seems to come in waves.
 
-I've also said yes to read and correct spelling and markup mistakes in blog
-entries for a client, possibly providing him with graphics (already did the
-creative part of that). The actual work might be postponed untill tomorrow,
-but it's better to do it today, to take out stress of dealing with eventual
-failures and mistakes. It's never fun to do that last minute before - or even
-after the newsletter is sent out. Visit the blog [Vejviseren](http://byvandring.nu/vejviseren/]
-this [Byvandring.nu](http://byvandring.nu/) Monday at noon (in Danish).
+I've agreed to read and correct spelling and markup mistakes in a client's blog,
+possibly providing him with graphics (already did the creative part of that).
+The task  could be postponed, but it's better to do it ahead to take out stress
+of dealing with eventual failures and mistakes. It's never fun to do that last
+minute before - or even after the newsletter is sent out. Visit the blog
+[Vejviseren](http://byvandring.nu/vejviseren/) this [Byvandring.nu](http://byvandring.nu/)
+Monday at noon (it's in Danish).
 
-I'd like to begin a new habit of backing up and updating my computer on Saturdays
-today.
+I'll start a new habit of backing up and updating my computer on Saturdays
+today. We use git for version control of our web sites, and I've started
+using it for my design documents, but lacked the habit tied to using it in that
+area of my work, so the archive is not up to date, and frankly, it's a mess,
+tying my effectiveness down when searching for reference files for new jobs for
+the same client.
 
-If I can squeeze it in, I would think it nice to spend some time in the garden,
-it needs tending. But it's probably better to postpone that for tomorrow, or use those tasks
-for a productive break from screen time. Compost, strawberry plants and the usual
-removal of a hundred out of thousands of small trees.
+If I can squeeze it in, it would be nice to spend some time in the garden,
+it needs tending. But it's probably better to postpone that for tomorrow or
+use those tasks for a productive break from screen time. Compost, strawberry
+plants and the usual removal of a hundred out of thousands of small trees.
 
 ## Touching issues
 
-Following a conversation with my partner about it, pointing towards CouchDesign,
+Following a conversation with Jonas about it, pointing towards CouchDesign,
 here are some of the subjects I've been touching with my client work this week,
 each somehow related to [our pending's list](http://couchdesign.dk/):
 
@@ -32,7 +39,7 @@ each somehow related to [our pending's list](http://couchdesign.dk/):
  * bar code generation
  * process documentation
  * archive structure
- * key signing with caff
+ * key signing (using caff)
  * design management
  * licensing
  * slippy maps