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-# It's about joy
+# It's about playfulness
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 [[!img circles_small.jpg alt="Part of a water colour painting" link=130821]]
 
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 Jonas encourages me to base my designs in visual communication and set the
 technical and user experience oriented concerns a bit aside. And finally I
-felt resonance in me. At the moment I am developing my artwork by diving
-into my creative space for a short while each day and playfully create images.
-I need to apply the selfsame playfullness to my web design process.
-
-Play is my new parole. I'm testing it through my daily water color painting
-following my latest challenge of getting a number of paintings ready for a
-specific date. For instance I paint with the colors I'm wearing that day,
-or landscapes and skies. Stripes, circles, soft shapes and lines, colors
-running and mixing on the paper. I'm absorbed with it like a child and
-looking forward to testing out the next idea coming up. You see, I get new
-ideas along the way.
-
-I still can't visualise any glossy responsive web designs. But I'm confident
-that they will show up, and lots of them, as soon as I stop speculating and
-get to work on it. Which I will do as soon as possible.
+feel a resonance in me.
+
+Playfulness is my new parole. I practise play through my daily water color painting
+sessions, a continuation of the routine I've formed during my latest challenge
+of getting a number of paintings ready for exhibition at a specific date.
+I develop my artwork by diving into my creative space for a short while each
+day and playfully create images. For instance I paint with the colors I'm
+wearing that day, or landscapes and skies. Stripes, circles, soft shapes and
+lines, colors running and mixing on the paper. I'm absorbed with it like a
+child and looking forward to testing out the next idea coming up along the way.
+
+I need to apply the selfsame playfulness to my web design process.
+
+Of vourse I still can't visualise any glossy responsive web designs. But I'm
+confident that they will show up, and lots of them, as soon as I stop speculating
+and get to work on it. Which I will do as soon as possible. Today.
 
 How about you? Are you inspired making artwork or still waiting for
 inspiration to show up one of these days?