From 8d78a9ba18d453f7fae574cc18bf35329295d10b Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Siri Reiter Date: Sun, 24 Nov 2013 23:23:49 +0100 Subject: Text changes, rewrites. --- blog/entry/131124a_en.mdwn | 24 ++++++++++++------------ 1 file changed, 12 insertions(+), 12 deletions(-) diff --git a/blog/entry/131124a_en.mdwn b/blog/entry/131124a_en.mdwn index 2e1555a..3aa8d35 100644 --- a/blog/entry/131124a_en.mdwn +++ b/blog/entry/131124a_en.mdwn @@ -4,10 +4,10 @@ [[!img self_small.jpg alt="Am I up to this?" link=131124a]] -I've signed myself up for a talk and conducting two discussions +I've signed myself up for a talk and for conducting two discussions at the [MiniDebconf-Women](https://wiki.debian.org/DebianWomen/Projects/MiniDebconf-Women/2014) coming up in March. They will be my first small contributions -to the Debian community. And my first public talk at all. +to the Debian community. And my first public talk ever. [[Read more|131124a_en]] @@ -16,10 +16,10 @@ else=""" [[!img self.jpg alt="Am I up to this?" size=600x link=self]] -I've signed myself up for a talk and conducting two discussions +I've signed myself up for a talk and for conducting two discussions at the [MiniDebconf-Women](https://wiki.debian.org/DebianWomen/Projects/MiniDebconf-Women/2014) coming up in March. They will be my first small contributions -to the Debian community. And my first public talk at all. +to the Debian community. And my first public talk ever. The talk is called "Graphic Design with Debian". I've made an initial presentation of what it's about [[right here|talks/graphicswithdebian]]. @@ -34,17 +34,17 @@ dialogue. I want cooperation. I want further understanding - both ways. I want us to level with each other. This is not easy. I live and work with a geek, and God knows -we don't always speak the same language. I've also seen a -snub-nosed designer being boo'ed out of a presentation. I -won't let that happen to me. I have no design presentation. I -have no ideas up front. I'd like to invite coders into my +we don't always speak the same language. I've also previously +seen a snub-nosed designer being boo'ed out of a presentation. +I won't let that happen to me. I have no design presentation. +I have no ideas up front. I'd like to invite coders into my world. I want to introduce coders to design thinking. I know it is possible, and if anyone can do it, I can. At least I -hope. +hope so. -I have some cleaning up to do in my world to make my points -understandable. I'm glad there is a whole winter to do that. -I'll keep you posted. +I have some cleaning up and other preparations to do in my +world before the party begins. I'm glad I have a whole long +winter to do that. I'll keep you posted. """]] -- cgit v1.2.3